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      [NEW] Member Solo Activities Subforums!   03/11/2017

      Hey Karaholic! Since all of the members are now with different agencies, we thought it'd be appropriate to create new subforums so members can stay in touch with their activities. Please try to post here from now on with future updates and events.  Here are the new subforums we've created:
      Park Gyuri: http://www.karaholic.com/forums/index.php?/forum/158-park-gyuri-solo-activities-motion-media/
      Han Seungyeon: http://www.karaholic.com/forums/index.php?/forum/159-han-seungyeon-solo-activities-jwide/
      Goo Hara: http://www.karaholic.com/forums/index.php?/forum/157-goo-hara-solo-activities-keyeast/
      Jung Nicole: http://www.karaholic.com/forums/index.php?/forum/160-jung-nicole-solo-activities-b2m/
      Kang Jiyoung: http://www.karaholic.com/forums/index.php?/forum/161-kang-jiyoung-solo-activities-sweetpower/ For Youngji, we've opted to leave the forum as is as she is still with DSP Media.  Thanks for your attention, hope you continue to drop by and visit.. new members and old! 

      -KH Staff

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  1. On 28-10-2016 at 0:37 AM, iammai said:

    A newly minted Chapter 7 is out on wattpad. https://www.wattpad.com/323360360-always-smile-cafe-girlxgirl-romance-chapter-7

    It didn't go through a total overhaul, but it's different from what's on here such as fleshed out conversations instead of a flashback. The chapters after this will definitely be affected and won't be the same from what has been posted here. I am considering changing the next chapter titles as well. 

     

    So yes, lots of writing to do. Fridays will always be the day for regular updates, but I placed a views goal for an early chapter release.

    Good stuff!


  2. 1 hour ago, iammai said:

    Chapter 8 is out. Protector Ham is still the star of this chapter.

    https://www.wattpad.com/323361081-always-smile-cafe-girlxgirl-romance-chapter-8-i

     

    I didn't change much in this chapter. I have to admit, I really like the chapter the way it was with Protector Ham. I was worried the flow was abrupt, but after reading it, it wasn't so bad. Right?

    Some details have been added, the toastie recipe is changed. Please leave comments/vote :)

     

    As for the next chapter, I'm splitting Chapter 9 Part 1 and Part 2 completely. I'm going to add more and edit more from this point on. Next week, I'll send a PM to those who were reading the fic previously since now it makes sense to call your attention.

    It's getting better and better!


  3. 4 hours ago, iammai said:

    Yes. This story is far from the end. To be honest, I got stuck when Nicole and Jiyoung left KARA. The whole lack of KARA5 interaction demotivated me. But I know how it all ends and a general idea of how it reaches that end. I just stopped writing it (boo mai! bad kitty!).

    Also, I read the existing chapters and might re-write some parts. More ~Show not Tell~ or not rushing some events. So far, I've loaded 4 Chapters with minimal edits. I plan to update every Friday (with added updates when the views hit a certain number). 

    I won't be uploading the new/edited version here at Karaholic. I'm going to focus on it at wattpad. I think having non-fans would also help check whether the characters are well-written. We know these girls and we know they are different, but do other readers feel the same? I'm attempting to write it better but putting it on wattpad.

    NIce! I found this fanfic not long ago and i totally love it! Can't wait for the new chapter and the updated chapters :), does wattpad give notifications?
     


  4. On 7-10-2016 at 1:25 PM, iammai said:

    To everyone following this fanfic, I decided to move it over to wattpad. I'll be polishing up the story. Also, the way things will go from chapter 10 would step into a bit of more mature territory.  

    If you're still curious with the story, please follow it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/86532428-always-smile-cafe?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks

    Will there be a new chapter?