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    True Or False

    in The Play House

    Posted

    On 30-11-2016 at 8:04 AM, yummiberries said:

    False. More like I don't eat breakfast at all. I wake up too late =(

    Np knows what character that is in my dp without using image search.

    No clue tell me!

    Np is sick

    [FIC] ALWAYS SMILE CAFE (Ongoing)

    in Fanfiction

    Posted

    On 28-10-2016 at 0:37 AM, iammai said:

    A newly minted Chapter 7 is out on wattpad. https://www.wattpad.com/323360360-always-smile-cafe-girlxgirl-romance-chapter-7

    It didn't go through a total overhaul, but it's different from what's on here such as fleshed out conversations instead of a flashback. The chapters after this will definitely be affected and won't be the same from what has been posted here. I am considering changing the next chapter titles as well. 

     

    So yes, lots of writing to do. Fridays will always be the day for regular updates, but I placed a views goal for an early chapter release.

    Good stuff!

    [FIC] ALWAYS SMILE CAFE (Ongoing)

    in Fanfiction

    Posted

    1 hour ago, iammai said:

    Chapter 8 is out. Protector Ham is still the star of this chapter.

    https://www.wattpad.com/323361081-always-smile-cafe-girlxgirl-romance-chapter-8-i

     

    I didn't change much in this chapter. I have to admit, I really like the chapter the way it was with Protector Ham. I was worried the flow was abrupt, but after reading it, it wasn't so bad. Right?

    Some details have been added, the toastie recipe is changed. Please leave comments/vote :)

     

    As for the next chapter, I'm splitting Chapter 9 Part 1 and Part 2 completely. I'm going to add more and edit more from this point on. Next week, I'll send a PM to those who were reading the fic previously since now it makes sense to call your attention.

    It's getting better and better!

    [FIC] ALWAYS SMILE CAFE (Ongoing)

    in Fanfiction

    Posted · Edited by B.KS

    4 hours ago, iammai said:

    Yes. This story is far from the end. To be honest, I got stuck when Nicole and Jiyoung left KARA. The whole lack of KARA5 interaction demotivated me. But I know how it all ends and a general idea of how it reaches that end. I just stopped writing it (boo mai! bad kitty!).

    Also, I read the existing chapters and might re-write some parts. More ~Show not Tell~ or not rushing some events. So far, I've loaded 4 Chapters with minimal edits. I plan to update every Friday (with added updates when the views hit a certain number). 

    I won't be uploading the new/edited version here at Karaholic. I'm going to focus on it at wattpad. I think having non-fans would also help check whether the characters are well-written. We know these girls and we know they are different, but do other readers feel the same? I'm attempting to write it better but putting it on wattpad.

    NIce! I found this fanfic not long ago and i totally love it! Can't wait for the new chapter and the updated chapters :), does wattpad give notifications?
     

    [FIC] ALWAYS SMILE CAFE (Ongoing)

    in Fanfiction

    Posted

    On 7-10-2016 at 1:25 PM, iammai said:

    To everyone following this fanfic, I decided to move it over to wattpad. I'll be polishing up the story. Also, the way things will go from chapter 10 would step into a bit of more mature territory.  

    If you're still curious with the story, please follow it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/86532428-always-smile-cafe?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks

    Will there be a new chapter? 

    True Or False

    in The Play House

    Posted

    4 hours ago, yummiberries said:

    True! (How'd you know?!)

    Np wonders if someone else will make a new post in The Play House...

    True

    np likes old music more than the music that's made now

    p.s. It's in your description ;)