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    • I'm really enjoying reading this, the dynamic between Wooram and Nicole is just really cute but I'm obviously shipping Howon/Nicole, even though the former seems a bit of a jerk right now. Wonder what's going to happen now because Howon is really not leaving a good impression on Nicole OTL.


    • It's so awesome to read Mincole. /sobs There's not enough fics about them. ;_____;
      I loved that chapter, I'm glad that Nicole is back in Korea and reunited with her mom and friends.
      Wonder what's going to happen, I think she should tell Minho, he has the right to know and he will get the truth someday so the sooner the better!
      I hope Minho didn't transformed into a heartless b*stard, LOL.
      Can you add me to your PM list, too? :3


    • This story made me day! :D
      Mincole, Keycole and cutie pie Yoogeun as the cherry on top? (:
      You got me when I saw Mincole but still... And it does help that the plot sounds interesting! ;A;
      I love drama and I'm quite curious about what's going to happen. :')
      Good luck with this, bb! (:


    • Well, thank you everyone! :)All of your comments made me happy! ;A;
      I'm also having problems seeing Key as manly so I try to stick to how I see him. :')
      @Grazny - I don't know why I'm so shy about posting here. ;;
      I will try to post more though I can't promise anything.
      And thank you about that super sweet comment! It just came to my mind that I don't allow anonymous comments on LJ, I will remedy to that soon. ^^ It seems that you can comment, didn't know why it didn't work.
      Haha, well Paris is so beautiful, I'm just glad it makes you want to go back! ;A;


    • Hi! It's Linouuu. I usually don't post my writing on Karaholic and I keep it kind of low-key and only post on Livejournal.
      Anyway yes, I'm posting here for once (': It's a one-shot featuring Key and Nicole (surprising, right?), I hope you will enjoy it. ^_^
      I usually write Mincole but I confess I had fun writing this so... (:
      It hasn't been beta-readed so if I would be glad if you could point me typos/mistakes.
      Since there's a filter, i had to modify them a little. ;;;


    • i could be your superman.
      kim kibum was the kind of guy who was not hanging out with the popular crowd but was still well-known and liked among his high school peers. he was a bit too flamboyant to be the guy girls lusted after but well, he had his fair share of admirers - though most were either whores or gay guys. (he still shuddered everytime minho and jonghyun reminded of that half-naked guy who tried to jump him in the locker room a few month ago. nightmares had haunted him for the longest time after this traumatic experience.)
      though, there was a small problem about him - he was making a fool of himself everytime his dream girl (the untouchable, mysterious and popular jung nicole, a transfer from america) was less than twenty five meters away from him. (stuttering, tripping in front of her, being ignored, having his fly open while talking to her and yes, even having a boner, all of that had happened.) kibum just stopped caring after awhile, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger had always had been his motto.
      kibum had been after her for more than a year now and he was at a loss of what to do. even after all the times she had ignored him or had laughed at him, he couldn't stop wanting her. deep down, he knew she wasn't that snotty, ice queen b*tch girl everyone thought she was. she was fierce, sure, and a bit of a b*tch (though, bitchiness was kibum's territory) but it wasn't hard to see that her smile was not a genuine one. jung nicole was a mystery that kim kibum wanted to solve. he longed to see those beautiful brown eyes crinkling at the corners with malice and mischief and to see that beautiful mouth smile for real, not for pretense.
      sighing, he wondered how he would crack that tough nut. he had tried every trick he knew (and even jonghyun's advices, the serial dater of the school) - sweet talking, gifts, love letters in her locker but nothing had worked. (she had laughed at his bad pick-up lines, not opened the letters and gave back the gifts.)
      she was more than a challenge to him now, she was someone he had to fix, someone he had to make happy and someone he had to love because even if she wasn't convinced, he was sure nicole was the woman for him. (and he was going to show her, sooner or later.)
      -
      kibum was walking home alone, jonghyun being too busy with a college girl ('i have a date with gyuri noona!') and minho having a soccer practice (the kid had more interest in soccer than girls which was a bit scary) when he heard raising voices. curiosity rose within him and he looked around for the source of the noise.
      there it was. jung nicole and two guys, apparently fighting or not being very friendly with each other.
      'yah, what's going on here?' frowning, he came close to the trio. he wasn't usually playing the hero (he wasn't the guy who could fight, you know?) but nicole was involved and he wasn't going to pass by as if nothing was happening and then regret it later.
      'nothing, dude. go back to your business.' the first guy said. nodding, he turned towards nicole for confirmation. kibum wasn't going to go before she confirmed nothing was going on.
      'go, kibum. it's okay, i control the situation.' he chuckled. she controlled it so well that screaming could be heard in the streets. if that was what she called control...
      'i would feel better if i stayed. just to be sure nothing fishy is going on here. go on, go on.' he said, gesturing to the three of them and not caring about nicole or the two mean looking guys' opinions. he wasn't going to be a b*stard and let a girl alone with two guys (especially when they looked like those two - mean, big and ready for a fight) when his guts told him something wrong was going to happen.
      'get the f*ck out!' snarled the other guy. 'we ing don't need you here so leave before we ruin that pretty little face of yours.' oops, he didn't look like he was joking but what about nicole? kibum couldn't leave. he wouldn't.
      'sorry but no. i'm quite liking where i am.' being a smart *** wasn't the way to earn some brownie points but he was way past that and just wanted to get the f*ck out, yes but with nicole. 'though, i wouldn't mind leaving but only if the lady agrees to come with me.'
      before he couldn't even react, kibum was picked by the hem of his shirt and pinned against the wall. 'listen er, we don't like repeating ourselves. leave before we make you leave.' growled one of them.
      nicole was looking at him, fear in her eyes and he could see she was shaking. 'nicole' he whispered, getting her attention before mouthing orders. ('run when i say three, okay?') she shook her head but he was going to do it, after all, he was involved now and he wanted to save his own skin, too.
      'three!' kibum screamed, before kicking the guy who was holding him in his genitals and punching the second guy with everything he had. he didn't lost a second and started running, pulling the shocked nicole along. his hand was hurting but he couldn't stop now.
      -
      both panting, they stopped running when they were sure they weren't followed. it was slowly getting darker and the streets were starting to get deserted by mothers, young kids, old people and instead partiers and young people were getting ready to go out and have a nice night.
      they started walking side by side in the streets of seoul, both lost in their thoughts.
      suddenly, nicole stopped and looked at him, anger in her eyes. 'why didn't you leave? are you stupid? they could have killed you, you know!' angry, she started walking again before turning back. 'you're so stupid, kim kibum!'
      clenching his fists, kibum was starting to see red. he saved her and that's was how she was thanking him? 'and what are you, jung nicole? a perfect saint? why were you involved with them in the first place?'
      'i wasn't! they were just... never mind. i could have protected myself!'
      'oh sure,' kibum snarled. 'you indeed did a good job. i can't believe that's how you're thanking me!'
      looking at her feet, she felt bad suddenly. kibum has helped her and indeed, she wasn't even thanking him properly. she knew he was liking her and that she had always been mean to him, without reason. nicole had been flattered by all his attentions but wasn't ready to let a guy into her life and more important, into her heart.
      'thank you, kibum.' she whispered, looking shyly at him. 'i'm sorry for reacting this way, not being in control is a bit nerve wracking.'
      nodding, he smiled. 'don't worry about it, nicole. let's get you home, okay?' and proceeded to do just that, escort her home.
      -
      'so, thank you again for everything you've done for me, kibum.' nicole said, looking into his eyes. she had always knew he was beautiful (handsome was too many for him, kibum was delicate and beautiful and just... so kibum.)
      'oh, no problem, i'm glad i could help you getting away from those brutes.'
      laughing, she shook her head. 'i wasn't talking about what happened earlier, kibum. no, thank you for every pick-up line, for every letter, for every gift. though, i never appreciated them, i just want to thank you for loving me, i guess.'
      something stirred in him and he approached her, taking her face into his hands and leaning in to kiss her. softly, like petals that you would coax open to reveal a pretty flower. it wasn't about taking, it was about giving and kibum did just that, giving all the love and care he could into a single kiss.
      breaking the kiss, kibum smiled at her. he could see bright stars in her eyes and a real smile on her cherry and puffy lips. that's was he had wanted all along - see the real her and he couldn't be happier.
      'goodnight, nicole.' he whispered, caressing her face a last time before turning back and leaving.
      nicole touched her lips, smiling. she couldn't believe he had kissed her.
      'kibum!' she screamed. he was already in the middle of the street, grinning like a stupid lovesick boy (and he was exactly that. stupid, lovesick and a boy.) turning back, he looked at her, cocking an eyebrow (which was plucked better than hers.)
      'next time you try to get me on a date, i won't say no. just so you know.'
      he whooped, she laughed. it was the start of something good, they both knew it.


    • going to read this hon and will edit. (:
      kinda surprised me since you didn't post it at lj. (but thanks for your sweet pm, i'm super excited for a christmas card ♥)
      your poster is so pretty ;____; it's one of my favorite pic of Cole so obviously... ;O;
      can't wait to read but i have to finish stuff first. /sighs
      will come back to edit this.


    • I'm taking my usual spot. ^___^
      but baby, don't worry, it's ok. The most important thing is that you still updated in the end. (: so don't be sorry. ):<
      Can't wait to read it - will do so later, I'm still a bit... sleepy and not fully awake yet. ;;;
      So yeah, I wil edit this later hon!
      EDIT - Haha, Minho is such a playboy.
      And he doesn't like Korean women! Well, Cole is going to change that.
      I love how sexy and just powerful he is. :D
      Nicole being tongue tied is so not her, it proves how much she's affected. ^^
      But... I can't wait till he becomes addicted to her too, haha. 8D
      It's so good seriously, can't wait for more.
      Love you! ♡


    • Thanks God I'm there, then! kkk
      I'm taking a spot and I'm glad you updated. (:
      It's really going to make me happy before my two hours of driving... Don't wanna go. ):< /sobs
      Will edit this later, bb!
      Love you too. ♡
      EDIT - Ok, no! I'm not happy, I'm frustrated.
      It's the most evil cliffhanger ever. >___< /cries
      You're so mean. ):<
      I knew it was Minho! and I'm sooo curious about what's going to happen now. xD
      Nicole is so funny and cute, I really love what you're doing with her.
      Haha, Gyuri is taking the day off just when she shouldn't have. ;;;
      and Hara/Doojoon is a great idea, I would ship it. (:


    1. I will wait, I will wait. 8D
      I'm hooked, bb so it's gonna be hard to wait till newt week.
      Not even a little spoiler for me? /puppy eyes.
      Anyway, Jinwoon and Gyuri being related is really genius. :D
      I also love the dynamic between the two girls, GyuCole is awesome. ^_____^
      Hope to read more soon, Hermy! ♥
      Love you~ ♥
      PS - I'm online if you want to talk, classes finished earlier than planned. ^^


    • Aww, I'm touched it's sort of dedicated to me. (:
      and I like the idea of playing with your characters and well, trying new fics.
      Well, you don't have to go into too much details then, don't worry it's gonna be nice. ^_^
      My "secret" fic is going nowhere /sighs but yeah, would like to spread the Mincole love too. ;;
      I'm in a weird mood rn and writing is going to relax me so will try do so this afternoon, have two OS in mind first though... ;;;
      Anyway, about this chapter!
      Gyuri sounds pissed, haha and I think Cole's rules are going to be interesting.
      Looks like she had a good night with... Minho ? ^________^
      and they're gonna meet at work? ^^
      Can't wait for next week~
      PS - the poster is really cute. ♥


    • SPOT! ^_______^
      You know that I love you, right? ♥
      Will come back and edit later. (:
      EDIT - Awww, this sounds so good, seriously.
      Well, first, it's MinCole. (: ♥
      Then, I love the unique cast, a bit different from what we're used too see.
      I also super super super love work fics, haha. :DD It's like a fetish, lol.
      And well, it's written by you so of course, I love it (and you) kkk

  1. Thanks for the PM! (:

    It was totally awesome. Man, I wish I could write as much.

    Anyway, I'm this close to become a JongRi shipper because man... They just are so sexy together. *O*

    and kudos to your writing, you totally made me believe Gyul was in love with Jonghyun in that play! o:

  2. I had planned to post the second and final part way earlier but since Karaholic was down... ):< Sorry for the wait people and I'm glad KH is back. (:

    Thanks for the support and don't be silent, I mean... Even a little comment means so much to me and makes me want to write more.

    Replies:

    tiramisu123: Hermy! <3 Yeah but I was scared it would be a fail at first. Thanks God, some people left a comment. (: Ah, well... It's all thanks to you so I had to mention you. Let's pray I can write more soon... Hwaiting to you too! ^O^

    emigurl: Em! <3 I wasn't sure it was you but I am now, haha. Thanks for the support bb and well, Mincole shippers should unite! ;D

    Cherish: Thank you Cherish! :3 Here's the second part, I hope you will like it. (:

    jing's melody: Awwww, thanks! Here is the final part, enjoy!

    graszny: Thanks! They were so cute in Dream Team, weren't they? (; Anyway, I'm really grateful for your kind words. I'm a grammar freak in French so I try my best in English but yeah... ):

    So, here it is.

    -

    second part.

    She was on the road, driving to Incheon. Minho was playing against a famous Seoul team tonight and she wanted to be there, to support him. The last year had been tough for him, always training and never playing but he finally got his chance and was now playing with a national team and players he was still idolizing a few years ago. Since it was early and he probably wouldn't head to the stadium for practice before a few hours, she decided to go to his apartment, hoping to surprise him.

    It was a beautiful April day, sunny with a nice breeze, Nicole thought. She was hoping that the weather would be that beautiful in June, the month of their wedding. Getting out of her car, she checked herself one last time in the mirror before getting her own key out of her bag and opening the door.

    "Babe, you're here?" she asks, not seeing him either in the living room or the open kitchen. "Don't tell me he's still asleep!" she muttered under her breath, incredulity on her face. Nicole opened his bedroom door... and indeed found her boyfriend, except he wasn't sleeping and was quite busy, laying half naked with a girl on him. Her breath hitched, she could feel the tears forming at the corners of her eyes. Minho, her fiancé, was in bed with a woman... and it wasn't her.

    She didn't realize that she had knocked something - a picture of Minho and her ironically - down and that both Minho and the girl's gazes turned towards her.

    "Nicole! It's not what you think!" Minho says, pathetically. Oh God, not that line. She just turned her head, not wanting to hear him out, the situation was obvious. Nicole chuckled, shaking her head and then left her key of his apartment and her engagement ring on the dresser next to her.

    "Give my key to Taemin. Goodbye Minho." and she left, not looking back, not once, missing the panic, the love, the distress in Minho's eyes and the smirk on that girl's face.

    That day, an engagement was broken, both crying their hearts out. They're twenty.

    -

    "Noona, are you ready?" Taemin asks. It was always funny to hear Taeminnie calling her "noona" but she secretly loved it. They live together now, Taemin having graduated from high school three years ago and now being an uiversity student in Seoul. As for her, she's working full time, having graduated from her school a few months before and having opened her own bakery.

    "Yep! I think I am. What do you think?!" Nicole asked, turning around and showing him her dress, a beautiful light purple dress which was flowing around her thighs.

    "I think you look really pretty, noona." Taemin replied and she laughed before telling how cute he was, resulting in making the younger boy blush. "Well, let's go, Jinki is going to kill us if we're late to his wedding." she adds.

    Their friend was getting married to that nice Korean girl - SeungYeon - whom he met when studying in America. Nicole knew from the day he announced his wedding that it would be a hard day for her. She couldn't stop thinking of her own supposed wedding and then... of her ex-fiancé. Minho. He would be here today ("Nicole, it's friendship. I love you but I love Minho, too." Jinki said.) She honestly didn't care anymore because she just wasn't angry. After all, Minho didn't cheat on her, it was revealed a few months later by the press that that girl Nicole saw had orders to drug a player from the team and take quite compromising pictures in order to get a little money. Too bad she picked a damn rookie who didn't get much money and oops, too sad that his fiancée stumbled on them. Minho had actually been drugged and that's why he hadn't been fighting her off.

    Nicole remembers all her friends - especially Kibum and Jonghyun - calling her and explaining the same thing to her. It was just too late, she replied then. After all, she broke up with him on the spot and it would be weird to come back and say "Let's get back together now that I know the truth!" It was just impossible. Nobody knew how much Nicole hated herself for not believing the man of her life and now she was going to have to face him and she was sacred shitless. He was famous now, being in the media for being such a talented athlete and well... He had always been handsome but now, it wasn't just her knowing it but all the girls in Korea.

    They arrived at the beach quickly, Taemin speeding more than necessary on the road. Jinki had decided to get married on the beach, the same beach where Minho and her exchanged their first kiss. Thanks buddy, you're really making it this easier for me, Nicole thought ironically. Everyone was running around, getting everything ready. They found their friends easily, Jonghyun being the best man and Kibum standing near him.

    After a few minutes, they were asked to take their places and Nicole sat next to Taemin, in the second row. No traces of Minho.

    The wedding was beautiful, Jinki being quite handsome in his tux and SeungYeon being radiant in her wedding gown.

    "It should have been us, you know." she heard someone whispering in her ear. Minho. Nicole had been so engrossed in the wedding that she didn't hear him sit next to her. She wasn't sure she was going to be able to reply and just sent a shaky smile in his direction, not even making eye contact. Her hands were fidgeting on her dress. Oh God, God, God.

    The rest of the wedding passed in a blur, Nicole being too aware of Minho's presence next to her to get engrossed into the wedding again. The applauds upon seeing the newly-weds kissing made her comeback on Earth. She quickly followed Taemin into the tent where the party would take place, not ready to confront Minho yet.

    She was able to avoid him quite well actually and almost believed that she wouldn't have to talk to him at all. She had been sitting at Jinki and SeungYeon's table since the girl and her were also quite close now and Minho was sitting with the rest of the guys and his date, a tall and leggy brunette. Probably a model, she thought. Anyway, her plan of avoiding her ex had been a success... until she was grabbed from behind upon exiting the toilets and dragged onto the dancefloor.

    God, being in his arms was so good, she was almost melting.

    "I thought I would never get the chance to get you to speak to me." He said when he saw that she wasn't going to talk.

    "I... I am sorry, Minho." and before he could understand what was happening, she was sobbing in his arms, repeating again and again how much she was sorry for not believing him and leaving him.

    "Don't cry, Nicole, baby, you know I hate seeing tears on that pretty face." She tried to smile for his sake but couldn't.

    "You should go back to your girlfriend, she had been giving me evil glances for a while now." Nicole said, trying to joke. Minho snorted before glancing at the girl he brought with him.

    "She's not my girlfriend, I just wanted to make you jealous. God! Nicole, you don't know how much I still love you."

    "I... lo-" He kissed her, not caring if people watching them, not caring about anything but her.

    Four friends stood together, watching the scene, grinning from ear to ear.

    That night, two soulmates reunited. They're twenty three.

    -

    Minho is tired, having been overseas all week for a special training the club requested all the players to do. He just wanted to take a shower and join his wife in bed. Him and Nicole actually got married last year, on their 10th anniversary. Well, not exactly since they did break up during that time but still...

    Getting in the kitchen to get some water, Minho saw a note on the table. Interesting.

    "Hey hubby. <3 (Minho grinned.)

    I'm out, the bakery called, they need me. Coming back asap!

    Surprise for you in the fridge~~

    Love you!

    PS - Take a shower before getting in bed or I will kill you.
    ^_^
    "

    Curious, Minho opened the fridge, finding a box with two cupcakes inside. He was ready to eat one when... Wait. Something was written on the cupcakes.

    First cupcake - "I am", second cupcake - "pregnant!" Shock then happiness were written all over his face.

    Forget the shower, he was going to the bakery.

    That night, he became the happiest man alive. They're twenty seven.

    -

    Park Minhee was standing in front of two graves. Today, her grandpa died, two weeks after her grandma. It was a sad time for the family and their old friends ("God, grandpa Kibum, you are so dramatic!") but they all knew that it was time. Both had a nice life, filled with happiness, laughter and love and now, they were reunited again... and forever.

    She knelt down in front of the graves.

    "Goodbye grandpa Minho. Say hi to grandma Nicole for me. I love you."

    That day, they reunited, in heaven. Time and life weren't strong enough to break them apart. They're
    eternal.

    end of part two.

    end.

  3. Hi everyone!

    I'm Linouuu, a huge SHINeexKARA shipper. I'm more active at LJ so maybe some of you know me from there, kkk.

    One of my friend (tiramisu123) recommanded me to post my fics here. I'm mostly writing MinCole (OTP!) even if I would like to try others pairings someday.

    My inspiration is kind of dead at the moment. (which frustrates me because I want to write so badly....) Anyway, maybe getting some nice comments from you will change that.

    PS - English isn't my first language, I'm French so it's obviously not perfect. ):

    So, obiously, constructive comments are welcome, I need them. Just don't be too harsh, puh-lease?/puppy eyes.

    Disclaimer.

    I don't own Nicole, Minho or any other SHINee/KARA member.

    Only the plot is mine.

    Lifetime;

    A Mincole one shot. PG-13.

    first part.

    "Choi Minho! I'm going to kill you if you push me-"

    Too late. He dropped her in the water before taking off, running and laughing at the same time. She sighed. Why in the world was she friend with such a dork? Getting up, Nicole ran after him before realizing that she would never catch him, he was the most athletic in their group of friends and definitively took advantage of it during that kind of situation.

    She ran towards where the other boys were sitting instead. Taemin was eating his ice cream, looking so adorable that Nicole almost wanted to pinch his cheeks. Jinki was absorbed in his physics book ("Yah! Jinki! It's summer break!" she pouted. He just laughed.), Kibum was texting ("Probably this girl from yesterday" Taemin whispered.) and Jonghyun was writing lyrics, as usual.

    "Guys! You are so boring! We're at the beach, let's have fun!" Nicole screamed. All rolled their eyes. Couldn't she just enjoy the moment for 2 minutes? They have been running, swimming, playing volleyball and beach soccer all day and she was still up and so motivated... but not them.

    "Nicole, sit down, you're giving me a headache by being so... freaking happy." Kibum - or Key like he liked being called - ("Key... Like a key? Sounds stupid." she laughed when he told her his new nickname.) exclaimed.

    "You're so mean, Kibum." Nicole whined. Her friends were so boring! Come on, it was the first day of summer break and they were at the beach and they were just... sitting there, not doing anything. Guys. "Jonghyuuuuun, let's play volleyball!"

    "Again?" the blond guy asked. He was so tired and just wanted to write more, playing sports wasn't his thing at all. "Ask Minho, he will play with you. I don't want to, you know I don't like it."

    "But... Minho is going to beat me! He's too tall. You, in the contrary, are short and so, I can beat you." She replied, sticking her tongue out.

    Taemin, shocked, put ice cream in his hair ("How did you manage to do that?" Jinki asked, later.), Jinki stopped reading, Minho - who came back, knowing that Nicole wouldn't hit him anymore - was dying of laughter and Kibum... Kibum was literally rolling on the floor, clutching his stomach. ("You're such a drama queen." Jonghyun growled at him. Everyone thought they heard "Shut up midget!" coming out from Kibum's mouth.)

    "Yah! I'm still taller than you, Jung Nicole." Jonghyun pouted.

    "I know but you're still... short! Don't worry, you're still hot stuff, you know." She joked, laughing upon seeing his puppy face.

    Everyone chuckled at how hyper she was and at the dejected face Jonghyun was making. Teasing him about his height was really something he hated but he couldn't be angry, not at his childhood friend. Jonghyun was actually both Key and Nicole's neighbor. Minho, Jinki and Taemin lived across the street. All were almost the same age and being the only young people in the area, they got close quite easily.

    "Just be happy we're friends Cole. Now, go play with Minho before I decide to stop being friend with you."

    Nicole gasped. "Oh, so so so mean, Jjong! Well, let's go Minho!"

    The game had been tiring, Minho not going easy on her. ("But I'm a girl!" she screamed. He shrugged.) His competitiveness was too much, she thought. The four other boys left, saying that they were tired of doing nothing ("Come play with us, then!" Minho said. They all shook their heads.) and so, Minho and her were alone on the beach since it had been quite deserted all day. They both laid down in the sand, Nicole's head on Minho's chest. He was playing with her hair and she could feel her eyes closing.

    They don't know how, when or why it happens. One minute they were just laying together, him playing with her hair and her feeling content, listening to his heartbeat... The next minute, they're kissing, their legs entwined together, her arms around his neck, his hands on her waist. Breathless, she's smiling at him - oh so sweetly - and he's leaning on, capturing her lips once again.

    On a summer night, they both share their first kiss. They're sixteen.

    -

    It's graduation. Well for Nicole, Kibum - excuse me, Key - and Minho. Jinki has been living abroad for the past two years, having being accepted in Yale ("He's so ing smart!" said Kibum. Very eloquent indeed.) and Jonghyun, who graduated the year before them, left for Seoul. Seoul. That's also where both Kibum and Nicole are going. Their cars are loaded with all their belonging ("How can you have so much crap?" she asks, shaking her head.) since they are leaving for Seoul right after graduation. Key is going to live with Jonghyun since both will attend the same university, Jonghyun majoring in music and Key in fashion, no surprise there. Nicole is going to live in a dorm near her future culinary school.

    Graduation is quite a bittersweet experience, laughing, cheering and tears at the same time. She can't believe that they're finally done with high school, except for poor Taemin. It's like... starting a new life. Smiling, crying, she doesn't even know, she turns towards Minho, taking his hand in hers. They're all standing in front of the cars, saying goodbye to parents, friends...

    "I love you." Nicole whispers. It's going to be so hard, not seeing him everyday, not being able to hug him or kiss him whenever she wants to. Sobs are coming out of her throat before she can't stop them.

    "I love you too. Don't cry, time will fly and I'm going to come in Seoul during the summer, okay?" Minho says, trying to comfort her. He's not feeling any better though, with his girlfriend leaving for Seoul and him staying in Incheon. The football club of Incheon - a huge one - proposed him a contract, it was impossible for him to refuse, his dream was coming true. He wanted to decline at first but Nicole refused. ("You're not sacrificing your dream for me, Choi Minho!")

    One last kiss before Jonghyun and Key both do kissing noises behind them, like two stupid guys. All their friends accepted their relationship with no problem ("We actually knew it before you!" Onew said.) but still weren't quite used to see their friends being intimate with each other.

    "Call me tonight! No excuse accepted!" she screams before getting in the car. He nods and watches them leave, standing at the same place until he can't see the cars anymore.

    "Let's go, hyung!" Taemin says, knowing that Minho wouldn't like to be alone, not
    today.

    That day, she's leaving. It's their 600 days anniversary. They're eighteen.

    -

    Classes have been tiring and the day has been hell, getting scolded by the chef and losing her favorite bracelet. Nicole was supposed to meet with Jonghyun and Key at a bar where Jonghyun was having a gig a few times per month but she was was going to cancel, not being in the mood for a night of partying. She just wanted to cook herself a quick meal and then hop into bed. God, what a boring life! She reached her apartment (she moved out of her dorm a few months ago, too noisy and her roommate was such quite awful.) when she got the shock of her life. Minho was inside, cooking for both of them. She couldn't help but smile at the sight, he was so damn cute with that apron tied to his waist.

    "Hey babe, you're finally home!" Minho says, looking quickly at her before concentrating on the food again. Cooking wasn't exactly his thing but he had supposed that her girlfriend would be tired and wanted to do something nice for her.

    "Yep! Day has been horrible but now that you are here, it's the best day ever!" she replied, a cheeky grin on her face, approaching him and encircling his waist with her arms, hugging him from behind.

    "Ah, you're so cute!" he laughed before turning towards her. "Here, try this!" Nicole dipped her finger in the sauce, bringing it to her lips.

    "Wow, it's good, you really got better at cooking! Well after all... You have the best teacher." She joked before leaving the kitchen to go change into more comfortable clothes.

    Minho was done cooking when she got back from her room and they ate, cuddling together in front of the tv, watching a romantic movie. ("It's so sappy!" Minho complained.) Nicole got closer to Minho, almost sitting on his lap, her head resting against his chest and then, it happened. Both forgot the movie, clothes started flying everywhere in the living room, her shirt first, then his. Their lips joined together in a burning kiss, hands roaming all over their bodies and so, they made love, right there on the couch, forgetting about the world.

    That night, laying in bed, feeling happier than ever, he proposed. She said yes. They're nineteen.

    end of part one.

    Will post the rest later. (:

  4. I'm waiting for it because well... JongRi isn't a pairing I was fond of but your trailer for Scandal made me think twice about them, kk. :D

    Anyway, can't wait to read, maybe you will convert me. ^^

  5. BB!

    I love the plot. I wish I would have thought of this, haha.

    Seriously, I think it's going to be the perfect mix of humor, romance... and still a bit of angst? jk. (kkkk)

    I'm sure you already know whom I picked, right? but it looks like it's not going to happen, oh well... I will just imagine it's him in my head. ;D

    Especially since I don't know Karam and don't like JayCole so... ^o^ Don't worry though, I'm sticking with you till the end, no matter who's the male lead.

    Fighting! ^^

  6. Hey!

    Yeah, it has been awhile. ): Miss talking to you, bb. I'm doing okay but my mind is so blank when it comes to writing/frustrated. What about you? Awwww, thanks! <3 Maybe I will post one of my Mincole OS then and see how it's received. Let's see. (:

    This chapter was so cool, too. Poor Nicole, she's not doing any better but at least, she had fun doing that to Key! kkk He deserved it. But well, I'm sure he's not gonna forget this anytime soon... and will be after Cole. <___<

    Well, a jerk who change because of love is always cool. ^o^

    Can't wait for more, take care!

  7. I'm going to be around for a long time so don't get tired of me, haha./winks.

    I don't know if I have a way with words, I don't think so... Not in English at least but I'm trying and I'm glad it shows. I wonder if I should post my fics here... Should I?

    For college, don't worry about it, you have time to think about it and the right to be wrong and fail. I think that failing isn't a bad thing or a mistake, it's just a way to learn and yeah, no pressure bb!

    This chapter was so funny, Nicole amuses me. She's spunky and funny, cute and stands up for her opinions, I like that. Her situation sounds really bad though so I hope it's gonna be okay. Kibum is... well, arrogant but it's okay, I'm sure there's more to him than that.

    He must hide a soft heart somewhere. xD It's like the real Kibum, showing us his diva attitude when he's also such a softie.

    Update soon and take care~~ !

  8. Wow, commenting again! Definitively no more lurking for me, kkk. Nope, I didn't had to ask but well... I wanted to do it right, haha.

    But you know how much I love giving you comments... And I just remembered that I was the first people to comment on SWM so I feel special.

    Anyway, it wasn't boring at all~ ! I think it's a nice way to introduce Nicole because we can see how crazy and funny she is but at the same time, she's serious and tough and ready to go for her dream. All in all, she's truly loveable and not overly perfect. :3 I really love what you did with her here.

    Well, a few angsty scenes is right, every story need it but I'm glad that Key won't be the blinded, obvious best friend he is in SWM. (;

    Can't wait to see the appareance of the Almighty! ;D and well SHINee & KARA too.

    Good job Hermy! ^o^ Update soon but study well, too!

  9. bb~ !

    I'm finally commenting. ;D/no lurker mode, kkk.

    Ah, so niiiiice. I think I'm going to love it. ;D

    No angst? ;D Good~ ! (I won't have any violent pulsion towards Key THIS TIME.)

    Can't wait for the first chapter and their meeting because I want Cole to have a nice, happy life. ^o^

    Update soon? (but school fiiiiirst!)

    And well... Add me to the PM list ? (: